| 要素 | 范文 | 可选句子(按要求或实际情况) |
|---|---|---|
| Greeting | Dear Amy, | • Dear Tom, |
| • Dear Lucy, | ||
| • Dear Peter, | ||
| Place & Time | We moved to Shenzhen last week. | • We moved to Guangzhou last month. |
| • My family and I moved to Beijing two weeks ago. | ||
| • I moved to Chengdu with my parents last Sunday. | ||
| Weather | It was cold in Beijing. |
But it is warm and sunny here in Shenzhen. | • It was rainy and cool in my old city. • It is hot and sunny here. • The weather here is warm and nice. | | Activities | Last week, I visited a beautiful park with my parents.
I also went shopping. I bought some mooncakes. | • Yesterday, I met the neighbours with my family. • Last weekend, I went to the beach and took many photos. • I also rode a bike in the park. | | Feeling & Reason | At first, I felt sad because I missed my old friends.
Now, I feel happy because I have made some new friends.
I miss you very much! | • At first, I felt nervous because everything was new. • Now, I feel excited because my new school is great. • Now, I feel happy because my classmates are friendly. | | Closing and senders | Love, Lily | Your friend, Joe |